Remember when having a discussion, be positive and persuasive. Sell the hiring official on why you are worth more.
Example conversation addressing base salary
You: "Hi Ms. Richards, I’d like to thank you for the offer and wanted to see if we could address a few minor changes before I accept. The first area I'd like to discuss is the base salary. While I appreciate the current offer, I’ve done a little research on average salaries in this area, and see for organizations your size salary ranges from $35,000 - $68,000. Since I bring more than 8 years of expertise supervising technical operations and employees, and I possess an Active Top Secret, SCI clearance, I will be able to immediately contribute to the team and operations. I am asking you to consider increasing your initial offer to $47,000 which is more in keeping with the skills and experience I bring."
The employer could provide justification for the initial offer and/or the counter offer. Be prepared to respond.
Employer: "That is the starting salary we offer all new employees, and increases may occur annually during employee reviews."
You: "I completely understand that you have an established starting salary for new employees. Although I am a new employee, I exceed many of the basic requirements and already hold an active clearance that can save time and money as well as allow me to hit the ground running. I am happy to show how I can be an asset to the team if you would be willing to conduct my performance review in six months instead of 12, and, if I meet agreed-upon requirements, then you would consider raising my base salary to $47,000."
Example written negotiation for salary and relocation support
December 2, 2018
John Jones
XYZ Technical
156 Tech Drive
Atlanta, Georgia, 30030
Dear Mr. Jones:
I am excited about the offer you extended on December 1st, 2018, and look forward to the prospect of working at XYZ Technical. I feel confident I will make a significant contribution to the growth and efficiency of the team over the short and long term. The terms you have described in the offer are acceptable, with a few minor changes.
Base annual salary offered: $40,000
The research I've completed on comparable salaries in Atlanta, Georgia (job market range $35,000 – $68,000), show that a base salary range of $45,000 - $52,000 would be the market value of the knowledge and expertise I bring to this position. My 8 years of experience overseeing technical operations and supervising technical teams allows me to immediately be an asset to the organization with little to no training time involved. In addition, my current active Top Secret, SCI clearance permits me to engage in operations that are vital to the organization with little to no delay. Based on the above, I would ask you to consider as a compromise, a base salary of $47,000.
Relocation package: none offered
This position would require me to relocate, which I am excited to do, but the full cost of relocation is $9,000. If you could provide a relocation stipend of $4,500 it would greatly assist in expediting the start of my onboarding process.
If you could make these adjustments to your offer, my performance will demonstrate my value. I am prepared to hit the ground running as part of the XYZ Technical team, and I am eager to achieve results for this division.
Sincerely, Leslie Smith